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SickButPretty 2008-10-01 ch 13,	abuseYah : ). She finally warmed up to Talbot... a lot actually. Too bad she got interrupted, but maybe good, seeing as it might have been awkward afterwards... I know that whole friend thing when you hook up and it makes the whole thing go to ** coz you realise in hindsight you were never meant to be anything more than friends... Anyway looking forward to next chapter.
SickButPretty 2008-09-28 ch 12,	abuseHey ! (Kidding...) I haven't read this for ages. I've been studying (ugh, fun.) Anyway good chapter, I'm starting to like Cainell a little better. She's a cool chick but I like Talbot so I'm happier when she's being nice to him. Cainell's father is a stick, he's got that right. I'm gonna read the next chapter soon.
Mosaic Stains 2008-09-07 ch 13,	abuseLong time no receive a review from me huh? I guess many people could say that... but as you know, I've been pretty busy and most of time am too tired to even more than an hour and a half on the computer... So that makes reading and reviewing anyone out of the question. Well, to move away from the topic of my sorry , let me get a move on with the review: {I shrugged. “That depends on how you mean. I’m alive, yes, but I’ve got a ’ soar headache, feel a bit dizzy, and have the oddest wedgie imaginable.” Through my words Linda chuckled.} It seems like Linda definitely isn't that bad... especially since she has a sense of humor and tries to give sound advice later on. {I interrupted her. “This told me that you went to the hospital because I had risen your blood pressure, I was driving you crazy with my wild, sexual appetite—my life is nowhere near that. God, if I was havin’ as much sex as your sons, then you could call me being sexual wild.” I wanted to ask her where had she been the entre time, believing everything that came out of his mouth. A pack of sold to a cow.} I have two things to say to this: 1) It's about time she told them what she thought and her mother what was really up & 2) (let me clear my voice to sound like a smart **) I think you meant sexually wild and entire in the next sentence. {I felt dead, almost as though someone else was having the conversation with them and I was in my body somewhere else. I had imagined that the talk would go worse than it was. It was probably because I wasn't giving them much of an argument.} Sincerely I've been there where you feel as though somebody is speaking out for you and you're simply doing the watching. I think it's a moment of silent wonderment as to where you got the strength from to say what you're saying and if it's really you saying what is being said. {I walked away from the kitchen and heard my mother call my name to say something, but continued on. Nothing else was going to be said and I wasn’t going to let them weaken my defenses a second time. In my room, I waited until Humper entered behind me to close the door. My footsteps to my bed were counted and I fell back on the comfort of fluffy blankets. Even as masculine as I was, I loved soft blankets. My head laid on the pillow, sinking into its softness fast and my eyes began to close. Humper stepped over my side and curved his body into mine, then dropped his head on my stomach.} I think this part would have ended more strongly or reasonately if you have left where she thinking how she wasn't going to let them weaken her defenses a second time. {“Can I kiss you?” Uncertain of what to say, I sighed. This was the mistake that I knew was going to happen. It had happened with Justis. We had started out as simple friends, and he had been the one to take it a step further, after I had consented finally, he had realized a few months later that we were better as friends.} Why can't some guys-- people, because women do it too-- just take no for an answer. I guess "Didn't I just tell you no nigga' has to be yelled. ;' ;) {Talbot laughed. “Close your eyes.”} "Like I'd trust you..." {I wanted to scream. I felt like I was back in fifth grade when I had been cornered by Thomas Juggs just so he could give me a Valentine’s Day card. I hadn’t known whether to accept it or beat him up.} Something like this happened to me in the third and fifth grade. {I was like a guy. They couldn’t go to sleep with hard-ons.} Two things: If you can't get it, take it! And... "Open your mouth!" {my kisses focused at his neck softly} I think it's better to put 'my kisses softly focused on his neck'. In many ways, I guess it was about time you had all the parts happen that did-- I bet they made a couple of your reviewers happy. "Hun, hun?" Anyway, Good, entertaining chapter and Resolutions was a good title for it. Until my next review for Count 2 Three, which should probably be tomorrow. M.Stains
SirScott 2008-09-01 ch 13,	abuseIt's about time that she told her father off. He's been a horse's butt through out the story. The love scene with Cainell and Talbot was pretty hot. It's too bad the cell phone went off. ~SirScott
righthere431 2008-08-26 ch 2,	abuselol that kinda sucks... talbot's gr leaving him for a girl
righthere431 2008-08-26 ch 1,	abuseoh interesting so far =]
jammi 2008-08-26 ch 13,	abuseI was hoping she'd be at a more steady place before she jumped Talbot. She still thinks she doesn't like him, and she's just using him because she's hot and bothered. But I guess that is an improvement since she slept with Justis just because and with Talbot there's something there. Although, first you said the lust she felt wasn't really there and then you said that she could still feel the familiar warmth in the pit of her stomach. So wouldn't that have been the lust she thought she didn't feel? I like the fact that it was Talbot who made the first move but then he left and she went and got aggressive. It fits what we know about her, even though she should stop playing with ol' boys emotions, lol. Her mother has some serious dependency issues, on her sons, on her ex and on Cain though on that front it seems as if she wants it to be a co-dependency type deal and is upset/worried since Cain won't take that position. I'm glad she called her father out on his asshatery, and on her moving out. Of course, now her mom will probably be calling every two hours, but at least she'll be out of that house and away from her father's influence. Are we going to get her brothers' view on her moving out and her new relationship with Talbot?
Senora-del-Sol 2008-08-26 ch 13,	abuseThis is a great story. The story is similar to real life, sometimes slightly exxtreme, bu it's all believable, and that makes it all better. The reader can feel the **-up messes in their lifes, probably because you've said it was somewhat baesd up on real life. Its great, and keep up the good work.
eshlie 2008-08-26 ch 4,	abuse'She as raped?" LOl
eshlie 2008-08-26 ch 3,	abuseGood job. I don't know what to say ;)
eshlie 2008-08-26 ch 2,	abuseGood chapter. I'm sorry but my reviewing skills suck, please forgive me.
eshlie 2008-08-26 ch 1,	abuseIt's a nice start for a story :) I'm a sucker for tomboy stories (good ones, like yours) cos I sorta a tomboy myself. Not a surprise.
wolfblood82 2008-08-26 ch 13,	abuseWell yeah, what had happened in the latter part was really sudden tbh. Maybe you need to have some kind of build up... I don't know. As for the part on Cainell's dad, all I can say is "whoohoo! Take that! **!" :D For some weird reason, I thought it as a form of karma. Anyway, for some unknown reason, the ending part seems a bit weird to me. I just can't figure out the cause. It's pretty much of a gut feeling tbh. :S Anyway, nothing to say for now. Getting hungry and a hungry man is a stupid man lol! XD Anyway, glad to see you update. And yeah, working on a new chapter of COA. Hopefully I can get it up by this week. :)
cls81690 2008-08-08 ch 12,	abuseI like where things are going, and you know how much I'm enjoying the story so far. The characters are vivid, the plot is as real as dust and sunshine, and I actually want to know what happens next.
SirScott 2008-08-08 ch 12,	abuseHm, well all I can say this is. Just hang in there Talbot, she might come around in five or six years if you just hang in there. ~SirScott

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