kayla.
amazing.
beautiful.
i
HEART
it!!
(:

Wonderful, but I would have liked more action, but I'm sure its coming soon! There are a few spelling errors, but not so major that I can't read past. Keep up the excellent work!

X--hime1221

Love the medicine! Not the provocative content so much though. That I could do without, but you seem to be very good about censoring it! If it stays at this level I could tolerate it; but that's just my opinion! Post soon PLEASE!

X--hime1221

One of the slower chapters thus far...but it keeps the story moving forward, and that's all I care about. The cursing is not so appealing to me, but I can see where it's neccesary to portray the character's different personalities! Nice job!

X--hime1221

Best ending of any chapter by far! Love the medical stuff again! And did i ever mention that I love the name 'Kelura'? Well I do!

X--hime1221

Wonderful second chapter! Really gets you hooked on the story! Nice closing line as well!

X--hime1221

Rock On! This is an AWESOME story! I love the way the sentennces are written! I've read all the other chapters and I absolutely adore them. I will be reviewing all of the other chapters and any other chapters you post if the story remains as engaging as it has thus as as i am sure it will.

X--hime1221

Whoa! Is that copyright thing at the bottom real, and serious?

wow, interesting story. I think using third person might bring more people into it. I like the details and descriptions. good job!