robert johnson, oh yeah...

you know what i love best about this one is that half-rhyme of "know" and "explosion":

He said “Yeah, Smoky’s in a sorry state, I know.

Catch the Star-trail south to gold veil dust explosion.

and of course this whole psychedelic blues explosion thing. wow.

The way you're able to write the rhythm and diction of this astounds me. It's really quite amazing. The rhyme is perfect, the dialect is spot on . . . Everything about it is great. Lovely work. Keep writing! :)

Yet another satisfying read. The words are so wrong, they're right. This is so far my favourite, because I've been thinking about soul-sellin' a lot lately. Keep writing!

Dx

Well. Speaking of Robert Johnson. That's weird. Didn't see this summary before reviewing the last work. I get a real picture of vividry here. The situation, and the progression of the scene jumps out. It connects to the listener or reader in this case. Excellent specifics in this to amplify the tone. Great write. MD:77.