inspiration to remember God's goodness!
Would make a nice song...hm, hm!

The phrasing is a little awkward, but overall this is nice! Setting up the contrasts with the imagery really helps the reader better grasp a concept that is, quite frankly, beyond our reach as humans. God's glory is simply to great for the human to ever fully comprehend, but your imagery helps the reader with that contrast. Great work. Keep writing, k.