Reviews for The Knight's Wish

Topaz36
2007-12-15
ch 1,

abuseI like this story! It is sad though. Oddly enough, I found the ending to be somewhat cute. You would think that Clarine would want to do the things that Terane was thinking she would do. But fortunately she doesn't!

I only saw one error that caught my eye while reading. In this quote, “I though you had some officer's meeting or something like that," I think you mean thought not though.

That's about it. Again I like this story and you should make more like it! :D

~Topaz36

Kiea Evergreen
2007-12-10
ch 1,

abuseThat's so sad! Is he really dead? For sure? Or will he come back later? Poor Clarine.. but at least one of her freinds survived. Keep up the great work! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder what will happen next. Write you later! ;)

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