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| sacredstorm 2007-12-28 ch 1,  | abuseYour poems are well-written, but they don't really touch a person or make them feel something. Sorry, but it's true. Try writing something that really moves you, something you care about. |
| Tuft of Fluff 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was great! I love the rhyming and the two-line stanzas. I can definitely relate with this poem! Keep writing! |
| VegasGoddess 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was... so intense! And BEAUTIFUL! Jazzy... this is amazing! I absolutely loved it! It is going on my faves, for sure. EXCELLENT FREAKIN JOB, GIRL! I am so proud of you! =) Love ya, ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |
| shadows of a trackless sea 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked this., a very good message. However I think that if you are going to rymn make sure not to use the same word to do it. (like right and right) it doesn't flow as nicely. Also you should check to make sure that things rymn (me and bleed). Other than that I think you did a good job rymning and using various adjectives. ~S.S. |