Great poem, but really sad. But remember, there's someone who will never leave you. PM me if you want to learn more about Jesus. Keep it up!:)

I liked it. Slow and quiet and sad. Good job.
~Thursday

you captured your feelings so well, brought tears to my eyes...good job

i'd say it's pretty decent! i love the stanza about the dropped glass especially, wonderfully described...a few of the ideas are a little dragged out and have a hard time fitting into the essence of the poem in my suggestion, as in "the way you admired most of the small things in my life." and "how to force sound from this weak body but there are some things, I guess you just never forget." These phrases could be said in less words, it sounds more like prose, a tip, a poem is like a fist to unravel, not a palm that is already exposed and easy to see...keep it up...