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Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2007-12-11 . chapter 1
I've come back to this several times and re-read it. I have to ask. Is polorised a typo? Polarised perhaps?

Otherwise i think it is a very astute haiku.
xDancingintheRainx 2007-12-11 . chapter 1
I like this. Very creative and refreshingly new since I haven't read anything quite like this on fictionpress. The only problem is that the last line is only 4 syllables. Well written, well done.
Prieda Solo 2007-12-11 . chapter 1
wow. I actually love this. I will probably think about it all day.

That is so good. powerful whatsname on commercialisation :) And the title is so nice and so ironic all at the same time.

There is so much you can read into this. And that is a sign of Great Literature (heh).
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