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| xDancingintheRainx 2007-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseGreat word choice, and very well written. The first stanza is my favorite. "chipped nails and wrinkled knuckles" there's just something about that line that I love. Fantastic work! |
| Princess-anna57 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseSimple yet effective. Very good. Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |