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| call me ish 2008-01-16 ch 1,  | abuseit's blunt. rushed. jagged. and there is just something about it. the wording feels careful and exact and there is a certain kind of rhythm to it all. (this had me at: why do you look so blue, june?) |
| Midnight In Eden 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's a bit abrupt in places in terms of flow but I think that might be intentional. My only qualm was the exclamation mark and that might be a personal thing because I find them so overused and trite these days. Otherwise, kudos on creating something interesting. Midnight |
| SheridanSpence 2007-12-12 ch 1, | abuseWow- this is great. It reminds me of Modernist poetry. Well done. |
| Possessed Pencil 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuse:) interesting and well-written. kinda suspenseful.:) |