|Reviews for Bionic Irony|
| Ernest Bloom 6/3/08 . chapter 1
Oh man, this one shows it all so perfectly. The outstanding images, but they're loose; tighten up the screws. Prune out the leech words. And clarify the theme. It's funny: all your work strikes me the same way. So close, so very, very close you are! Just push it a tiny, tiny bit more and you're going to have it!