i liked it. i hope you gave it to her.

This is the cutest thing ever!
I wish my brothers cared enough about what I thought about them to want to write something to me.
I can totally relate to "I had only my writing".
I hope you gave it to her.

mebs change the end could be:
even though i wont say it out loud,
in truth,
i really do love you.
the end is just kinda contradictry from he begining...idk i dont know that it would make her feel better. shed know that you love her but then she'll just feel bad for you and worry about you... idk some things suck but they really just need to be said anyways...like a haircut..sometimes you just need to get the bangs cuz you need a change... it happens

I really loved it. Very well written.
I think you should definately give it to her! I'm a little sister myself, and I'd just die if my sister gave such a lovely poem for Christmas. :]

Don’t be made...mad

I like this a lot... the rhyming is great and the idea is so sweet... and I think you should give it to your sister because Im sure shell appreciate it...