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| LiMay 2008-04-30 ch 6,  | abuseLOVED IT! x) louis sounds so adorable AH! the perfect man! |
| Jeya! 2008-03-09 ch 6, anon. | abuseGood Job! A Short and sweet story, BraVO!! :) |
| Rayne 2008-03-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseAhahahaha Zomg I laughed 'til i cried when Elise was talking about laundry in this chapter. I love this story. |
| AgamiMuffin 2008-02-29 ch 6, | abuseloved it! i like long stories n all but i actually kinda liked that this was so short but not too one-shot ish, very sweet, there was a full length long story here but only in 6 chappies which i loved. The fact she (im assuming here) just had sex with him so suddenly after being so hesitant about it before was a bit...fast i guess, but still Very very cute story overall, very sweet, loved. |
| blackbubbleblue 2008-02-29 ch 6, | abuseHello, Great chapter! Don't like the alternative ending though. If you had done that I would of had to kill you. WHY is there no more Do you mind I ask my self thank you very much. I am NEVER talking to you again. (That won't last and you know it) Great chapter anyways. |
| Saamii 2008-02-28 ch 6, | abusemushy endings are always wonderful. good quotes from 'becoming jane', i just watched it and james mcavoy is gorgeous. |
| crazy fruit 2008-02-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseGr! No mroe ever -sob- but why? Also as funny as that other ending would have been Amy I would have had to kill you if you used it insted. I loveded it so much. See you at school your crazy friend. |
| The Real Batgirl 2008-02-27 ch 6, | abuse*breaks into sobs* NO! Heath Ledger died right after finishing Dark Knight...not Spiderman! It was a beautiful story until that. Psh, Spiderman is NOTHING compared to Batman. Anyways, I loved it, if you're going to go through and re-edit it, I suggest adding more detail to the scene, characters, and a touch more backround information. Awesome story! |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-02-27 ch 6, | abuseyay elaine for convincing you not to write that alternative lol GO ELAINE!! hahaa as for the chapter mushy but oh so CUTE =] and i'm adding this to my favourites BUT i've reviewed so woot do i get some form of prize? perhaps a SURprize? lol laters izzie |
| jenjen-0 2008-02-27 ch 6, | abuseAw, cute ending. Maybe an epilogue? ALthough I must say, that alternate ending does sound really good too... |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abusehey really good start this sems fun ill read the rest when i get home from school i could really enjoy this hehe |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-02-27 ch 6, | abusebahahahahahahha funny funny imma MULE!! and man, loralee made my day! hahahah aww its the end! oh well. go write dawn! ahhahaha i'm really tired and gross and sweaty from touch footy so i shouldd hope in the shower eh? xx elaine |
| RomeLi 2008-02-26 ch 6, | abuseVery, very cute. Definitely mushy, but I LIKE mushy! Thanks for finishing it. |
| muzikall. 2008-02-26 ch 6, | abuseHaha, I recently added you to my favorites...but I have a lot. 158, I believe. But that's because I've had this account for about 4 years...and I don't write. I just read. And, occasionally, review. :D I thought your story was cute...but I didn't like the ending. It was just...so abrupt, I guess. I definitely thought it would be longer, like at least 10 chapters. But I did like the song/poem bits...they were really cute. How did you get that idea, by the way? |
| Jayjack 2008-02-26 ch 6, | abuseAW! that was so cute! |