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Reviews For: Darling
Yoroy
2007-12-13
ch 1, 		abuseword usage and form are definitly of standard to your age. The story is trite, but I am chalking that up to the age you wrote this. Over all, I must say, that you are fairly talented. Don't stop the poetry.
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