ahh . this is so pretty

and more than pretty .. it is really deep .. profound.

very very nicely written

:)

this is so short, yet so powerful. I love how the number three is present in this poem. haikus aren't my thing -- mainly because I don't understand them, haha -- so I don't know if all of them are like this, but the fact is has three lines and three words in each of them is ace. I like it. the title could also change to fit in this category, but just "star" is nice too :)

I love this..It feels like falling through dreams, to me. I think someone could draw a really beautiful picture with these three lines as an inspiration. It also has a really nice out-loud sound, especially the alliteration in the last line.

Beautiful, intriguing. Rally nice haiku.

throes of stars...

nice...

Wow, this is SO beautiful! It's definitely going on my favorites. =)

-Christine