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Topaz36 2008-07-24 ch 8,	abuseWow, I didn't quite expect the salsa dancing but that was a pretty cool thing to add. So you like to type as you go huh? So do you know how this will end though? Oh well, however it ends I'm sure it will be great. :D Now I am curious about how Joe will take all this... UPDATE SOON! I like this story! :D ~Topaz36 PS Thanks again for all your reviews for my story. If you're curious, I am starting up a new story, so if you feel like it, feel free to look it up.
Topaz36 2008-07-24 ch 7,	abuseHee hee... I feel so behind! Sorry for not reading this sooner! I just recently got around to it (or well better late then never, right?). Anyway, loved the chapter! I really am wondering what went on between James and Joe. Hopefully we'll get to know pretty soon. No grammar mistakes disrupted the story (except I did noticed when Joe was talking privately with Lila she says something about stop moping around and you accidentally spelled it with two p's). Again, I really liked this chapter and I will stop typing now, so I can read the next one! :D ~Topaz
Kiea Evergreen 2008-04-12 ch 8,	abuseWow. Great chapter! WHo would have thought that that would have happened. I wonder what Joe is going to say about this? Keep up the wonderful job and up-date soon! ;)
dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-04-09 ch 8,	abusei like the chapter..i hope that you update the chapter sooner...bye..bye...
precious-memories 2008-04-08 ch 8,	abuseaw, cute, what about joe. that book shes reading says that the girl ends up with the guy shes known all her life, wouldnt that be joe not james. maybe joe hates james cuz james did soemthing bad b4. o well update soon!
Kiea Evergreen 2008-03-15 ch 7,	abuseWow! Great chapter. It does make you wonder why Joe and James hate each other. I think I got it all figured out. I guess I'll have to see what happens next. Keep up the great work and up date soon! Write you later! ;)
Lady of Confusion 2008-03-08 ch 7,	abuseUPDATE SOON!
precious-memories 2008-03-07 ch 7,	abusehaha, awesome story so far, update soon!!
animefreakgirl 2008-03-07 ch 7,	abuseWow...interesting really. Hm...I wonder what's the story with Joe and James. Anyways, not bad and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :)
Kiea Evergreen 2008-02-14 ch 6,	abuseInteresting. I like this so far. Topaz36 mentioned this to me and I thought that I would read it. It intriged me. Very good so far. I wonder what itis between James and Joe. I guess we'll find out sooner or later. Keep up the great work and update soon. Write you later!
Topaz36 2008-02-11 ch 6,	abuseOkay for my last review (for tonight at least): I liked how you used technical words in this chapter (i.e. "sugar shaker-thingy’s", classic). :D Wow this story is reminding me of different things. First, the old couple thing reminds me of my story (strolls down memory lane). :D The whole thing where James seems to be everywhere and is somewhat annoying reminds me of my life (the main difference between this story and my life is the guy who is following me is not exactly the most attractive nor nicest being on earth, and I do not care for him). I liked the part where Lila just told her friend to leave and realizes that she just made an error. Hee... hee... it reminds me when I was talking to my close friend about the guy I mentioned earlier and I introduced him as "You know my friend..." Let's just say, my close friend realized what I said and grew very worried of me (I seriously do not know where those words came from!). Anyway, coming back from memory lane. Good good! Please update soon! ~Topaz36
Topaz36 2008-02-11 ch 5,	abuseUh oh! Joe is coming in (me likey). :D I did not see anything in here that distracted me from the story. So no critiquing in this chapter! Oh well... Good, good! I like where this is going! I'm slightly sadden now, because I know there is only one more chapter left for me to read right now. ~Topaz36
Topaz36 2008-02-11 ch 4,	abuseLOL. Good chappie! I liked the comedic side of things. The only thing I noticed was when you wrote which book she was holding, you didn't capitalize the whole title (i.e. The Diary of Anne Frank). Other then that, good. Also, I noticed someone said in a review, that the phrase using the word "Knickers" is not commonly used in America. I, being an American all my life, have heard the phrase, "Don't get your knickers in a bunch" quite a few times in my life. So, I say the term "knickers" is fine the way it is. I shall continue! ~Topaz36
Topaz36 2008-02-11 ch 3,	abuseI liked the kissing scene (much different then how I did mine, so I give you thumbs up for creativity, if that is how you spell it). Speaking of spelling, I once again only caught one spelling error. You spelt besides "Besdies." Other then that, nothing that I could see. :D I shall continue in my journey of reading this story! ~Topaz36
Topaz36 2008-02-11 ch 2,	abuseSo far so good! The only thing that I noticed in this chapter was you spelled caught wrong (you spelt it like this: "cuaght"). Other then that, I did not see any noticable mistakes. Onto the third chapter! ~Topaz36

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