 Thegreative 2009-07-12 . chapter 5can u please review fast this is a really good story |
 Chryse 2009-06-10 . chapter 5This is quite a fun story. I really hope you update it soon. I know who I'd pick, I think, but I want to know if she picks him. |
 Demeterr 2008-06-18 . chapter 5Interesting so far. |
 Fleeting Moment 2008-04-15 . chapter 5I love this! Please Please Please UPDATE! |
 Sophia.Lobato 2008-04-05 . chapter 5PLEASE, update!
I love this story with all my heart! It's so intriguing and amusing... |
 Atamagaokashii Ookami 2008-01-29 . chapter 5haha
sweeney todd's awesome >.<
poor keith
but that's great
thanks so much for updating!
hope u contine soon. |
 writer's insantiy 2008-01-27 . chapter 1357 Things I Am Not Allowed is really going to be published/ Whoop whoop. Please give me updates when it will be published. I am defiantly going to buy it. email me at please. |
 vocecara 2008-01-23 . chapter 5 haha nice one. keep it up! :D |
 emrevolemina 2008-01-23 . chapter 5Wow ... that was kimda weird but I really liked the vampire part :D |
 sweets555 2008-01-22 . chapter 5hehehe. thats adorable. |
 Captainfantastic 2008-01-22 . chapter 5I usually don't get into a story unless it has to do with saving the world...or blowing something up...or going on an epic adventure. But I'm interested to see how everything turns out here, so please update soon! This chap was pretty funny. I like how the characters interact. |
 Enaid 2008-01-22 . chapter 5haha poor keith. good chap i like the shopping part cant wait for the nxt update |
 vocecara 2008-01-21 . chapter 4nice story(: would like to know the circumstances in which nancy got her cuts and all though. the boys all have pretty different personalities, alot of room for development.
update soon! :D |
 noriepie 2008-01-13 . chapter 4hahha, i love this story!
out of all, this is the story i'd pick first to read |
 .demi.91 2008-01-12 . chapter 1A very interesting story.
Sorry for the..negative criticsm but I have to question what a very wealthy man was doing at Spring Tree Assisted Living Home. Wouldn't he be wealthy enough to be in a private establishment or have his own staff of doctors and such?
Otherwise I like it and am a fan of your other work. |