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| Demeterr 2008-06-18 ch 5,  | abuseInteresting so far. |
| Fleeting Moment 2008-04-15 ch 5, | abuseI love this! Please Please Please UPDATE! |
| Sophia.Lobato 2008-04-05 ch 5, | abusePLEASE, update! I love this story with all my heart! It's so intriguing and amusing... |
| Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan 2008-01-29 ch 5, | abusehaha sweeney todd's awesome >.< poor keith but that's great thanks so much for updating! hope u contine soon. |
| writer's insantiy 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuse357 Things I Am Not Allowed is really going to be published/ Whoop whoop. Please give me updates when it will be published. I am defiantly going to buy it. email me at please. |
| vocecara 2008-01-23 ch 5, anon. | abusehaha nice one. keep it up! :D |
| emrevolemina 2008-01-23 ch 5, | abuseWow ... that was kimda weird but I really liked the vampire part :D |
| sweets555 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abusehehehe. thats adorable. |
| Captainfantastic 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abuseI usually don't get into a story unless it has to do with saving the world...or blowing something up...or going on an epic adventure. But I'm interested to see how everything turns out here, so please update soon! This chap was pretty funny. I like how the characters interact. |
| Enaid 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abusehaha poor keith. good chap i like the shopping part cant wait for the nxt update |
| vocecara 2008-01-21 ch 4, | abusenice story(: would like to know the circumstances in which nancy got her cuts and all though. the boys all have pretty different personalities, alot of room for development. update soon! :D |
| noriepie 2008-01-13 ch 4, | abusehahha, i love this story! out of all, this is the story i'd pick first to read |
| greek4lyf 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseA very interesting story. Sorry for the..negative criticsm but I have to question what a very wealthy man was doing at Spring Tree Assisted Living Home. Wouldn't he be wealthy enough to be in a private establishment or have his own staff of doctors and such? Otherwise I like it and am a fan of your other work. |
| Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abusethat last part was priceless >. |
| Enaid 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abusehaha good for her beating him in football and DDR(im soo bad at that game but luv it lol) i bet graycen is mad but respects her now. this is such an amazzlin story cant wait for the nxt update! |