can u please review fast this is a really good story

This is quite a fun story. I really hope you update it soon. I know who I'd pick, I think, but I want to know if she picks him.

Interesting so far.

I love this! Please Please Please UPDATE!

PLEASE, update!

I love this story with all my heart! It's so intriguing and amusing...

haha
sweeney todd's awesome >.<
poor keith
but that's great
thanks so much for updating!
hope u contine soon.

357 Things I Am Not Allowed is really going to be published/ Whoop whoop. Please give me updates when it will be published. I am defiantly going to buy it. email me at please.

haha nice one. keep it up! :D

Wow ... that was kimda weird but I really liked the vampire part :D

hehehe. thats adorable.

I usually don't get into a story unless it has to do with saving the world...or blowing something up...or going on an epic adventure. But I'm interested to see how everything turns out here, so please update soon! This chap was pretty funny. I like how the characters interact.

haha poor keith. good chap i like the shopping part cant wait for the nxt update

nice story(: would like to know the circumstances in which nancy got her cuts and all though. the boys all have pretty different personalities, alot of room for development.

update soon! :D

hahha, i love this story!
out of all, this is the story i'd pick first to read

A very interesting story.
Sorry for the..negative criticsm but I have to question what a very wealthy man was doing at Spring Tree Assisted Living Home. Wouldn't he be wealthy enough to be in a private establishment or have his own staff of doctors and such?

Otherwise I like it and am a fan of your other work.