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spiderfly
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is brilliant! Not a novel idea, but you express it very well. I love your choice of word - 'travesty' and 'alluring'. You follow the poem to its proper conclusion, which is as it should be. This is very accomplished. How about trying some poetry with punctuation?
soccergurl489
2007-12-13
ch 1,
abuseThe imagery was outstanding and it had great vocabulary as well. Very nice.
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