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| spiderfly 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is brilliant! Not a novel idea, but you express it very well. I love your choice of word - 'travesty' and 'alluring'. You follow the poem to its proper conclusion, which is as it should be. This is very accomplished. How about trying some poetry with punctuation? |
| soccergurl489 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery was outstanding and it had great vocabulary as well. Very nice. |