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| Moon's Poetess 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Awesome descriptions. I liked this. Only thing is that the paragraphs don't flow very well - you jump from one thought to the next which doesn't read so well, otherwise very cool indeed. Much enjoyed =) Moon's Poetess |
| starlit x sky 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! The way you use the words is really good, 'cause it gives it a sort of sense of mystery to the writing. Great job, I like it a lot! |
| Leaves of Labefaction 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is almost like a poem, the way you use the words. I like the choice of words, too. It seems like a good beginning to something, though it says it's complete. Awesome! |