lol nice that was good exspeially about something like ice u made it very good... so what did u end up getting on it?

it was good riley

dang I love it! The idea is original (least to me, I've never heard of anything like it!) It would make a good plot *hinthint* :P OK I have an overactive imagination, but seriously... the 4 seasons at war?? That would make an AWESOME book ^_^ Anyway, this poem was great - presented the scene really really well. The description was wonderful too ^__^ One of my favorites! ^_^

~FoxyWriter

wow.
u acually posted this!
but yea. its relly good.
AND REVIEW MY STORIES 2!
AND I WILL SHUT MY MOUTH ABOUT COMPASS FUNKY
...
well...i'll try 2 at least
*gigle*
lol
x

luvs it abby

So good! And the ice is slick. LOL

Great poem. I especially loved the comparison to a Trojan hose; such an effective metaphor.