d'aww. :D That reminds me of Zach. And aww, her hair is curly too? Zach's hair is curly in the back. XD I liked it. X3 it's adorable.

That was awesome! It's definitely like-able, so don't worry about anyone not liking it =)The most powerful line for me was
" Her life is in my arms" I think that really conveys your strong affection for her. " Tiny little tears and tiny little fears" is really very sweet too.

Well done!