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Elke 2008-06-26 ch 10, anon.	abuseAh, chapter 10 is the last? I really like it. I wasn't intending to read everything now but I kind of felt drawn to click the button. It's addicting, your story. Also, I can't help but picture Frank as Luciano and Gerard as Uriel (it's stronger than myself) but that works just perfectly. It's a very interesting story, with the dreams and the soft kiss and the dilemma. I'll be more than glad to read more, when it comes. x Oh right, I'm MissDarko :)
hprules 2008-06-11 ch 10, anon.	abuseYAWN to the 10th extreme. I want my 2 hours back. YAWN I say YAWN! This story didn't even make sense. The characters were took and reading this makes my ass hurt.
HazeleyedHoney 2008-04-25 ch 10, anon.	abuseWas Luciano raped or molested by his father? You should have Luciano's mom make him get some tutoring...that way Uriel could tutor Luciano. Just a suggestion even though it sound really cliche. More Luciano Uriel encounters please.
Metalic 2008-04-25 ch 10, anon.	abuseI'm really enjoying this, and I think it's a really great idea. But every chapter I read I feel like I'm going in circles. At one point it seems like things are going to move forward, but then the next everything just goes back right where it started :P. I'm all for building up the suspense and making us wait for the good stuff and such... but it just seems like nothing's progressing... and I'm starting to slowly lose interest in the story. Don't get me wrong, I love the idea and the characters are so lovable and easy to relate to. I just feel like I'm not going anywhere everytime I read a new chapter. I dunno, maybe I'm being impatient. But I do like it, like I said, it's a great idea and for the most part it's great. Keep up the good work!
Bentastic 2008-04-25 ch 10,	abuseAmazing, completely amazing!! Lucy's sudden lack of control is kind of a blow in the face, shows how he isnt in control of everything though he acts like it. Uri is a lost case. haha thanks for updating, youre amazing. This is the one current story thats got my blood pumping.
Love Eternally 2008-03-13 ch 9,	abuseevil evil luciano
HazeleyedHoney 2008-03-13 ch 9,	abuseWow! My mother would have beat me senseless if I was as disrespectful to her as Luciano was. Great Chapter. Update soon.
Love Eternally 2008-03-10 ch 8,	abusei kind of feel sorry for the jock. and luciano.
Bentastic 2008-03-08 ch 8,	abusewow, hot chapter. Uri is cute, he pretends to be a responsible, but deep inside hes still a hormonal crazed guy. the kiss was hot, but the words in Spanish changed from last time, found that surprising. Lucy is acting strange, he never felt like what he was doing was wrong. They are probably soul mates. :D amazing chapter, thanks for posting it up.
HazeleyedHoney 2008-03-07 ch 8,	abuseThat was my worst nightmare! shudders When I was a teenager and living with my folks, I was always worried about my parents walking in on me having sex. Luckily it never happened and the threat that they could walk in on me made the sex even better. But shit man...I would have died if they actually did. I really want to know what Luciano said in Spanish, so is the Profe gonna learn Spanish now? Also, I don't mind spoilers as long as you don't reveal any major plot twists. Great chapter! I'll be waiting for an update with bated breath.
Bentastic 2008-03-01 ch 7,	abusei liked this chapter. I didnt know/maybe forgot that dave was captain of the football team. Wow, thats kinda hot. XD thanks for posting up this chapter! amazing job!
Love Eternally 2008-02-29 ch 7,	abuseoh wow.
Usurp Authority 2008-02-29 ch 7,	abuseWow! I didn't know that anybody by the age of 10 hadn't already known what bisexual means. lol He must have really been sheltered. Does he even realize that Luci is high? lol Update soon.
HazeleyedHoney 2008-01-15 ch 6, anon.	abuseAw! No interaction between Uriel and Luciano! I know its still early in the story, but that doesn't mean that I don't want a cute meet between the two. Your story has me completely hooked! Please Update as soon as possible! Uriel and Luciano Forever! XD HazeleyedHoney
Bentastic 2008-01-15 ch 6,	abuseJordi is cool, i dont think he should be ignoring Uri much though. Its not his life afterall. But anyways, i was kinda glad that when jordi said, "I guess I was mistaken, I just never thought you liked...well you know," that he didnt actually say it. It would have thrown Uri totally off. After reading lucys part, i was like aw, por alex. i wonder if that was alex first, cause 17 year old are not that attached. i love your story. keep up the awesome work. :D

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