|Reviews for Out of Focus|
| Annie Jane 1/14/10 . chapter 1
Aw this is a really sweet piece of writing.
I actually really want to do this - but I'd probably fall off the roof and break my neck and that wouldn't be much fun...
but still alcohol and a roof... hmm I think they could mix well together.
I can see this either way - there could be love interest there or they could just be best friends. It works both ways, and I really like it - that's how friendship should be.
Anyway I'm going to go figure out a way to get onto my roof... It's just really high... hm
| blurrylights 11/25/08 . chapter 1
I don't know...I got more of the really close friends vibe. But whatever it was, I really loved the description with this story. You did an awesome job!
| Billie.Joelle 2/16/08 . chapter 1
This seems like a story with really no plot line, but its really good all the same... I can't explain it... But i really like it, you got both the people down perfectly. Very impressive
| wecouldgoandget40s 12/14/07 . chapter 1
Cool story! It's pretty awesome. Interesting views are put into it as well, like the insignificance of something compared to the larger and greater things. Great job with this!
| HollowxPromises 12/14/07 . chapter 1
I reckon he likes her because of the pause at the end... But it could just be me...
HAve you actually snuck onto someone's roof?