|Reviews for Contemplations of a Kite|
| RynDevien 12/14/07 . chapter 1
Great rhyming! It flows very smoothly. I like the details in this like "foot-worn ground". I don't know why lol. Just makes it a clearer picture. Good poem! Makes me think. Ryn
| Doc Blood 12/14/07 . chapter 1
I like this. Whimsical with deeper undertones. The unusal rhyme scheme seemed to work well for you. Nice job.