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Reviews For: Sacred Truths

Dream that was Life
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseI hope you do a second chapter for this, or the other story I just reviewed.
It drew me in, and when I got to the end to find that there was no second chapter, I was very disappointed. I hope you'll get to update it soon.

R.
Samantha Marie Haven
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abusenice stuff so far. i already have a connection with Blake, the forest is my home too :P he's a good character, you developed him pretty well so far. post some more whenever you get the chance, i'd definitely read it!! happy writing ;)
The Witches of Salaverry
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuseI really liked the title of this story. And the first chapter is great! My only recommendation is that you italicize the thoughts so we can distinguish them from the narrative. But I really like the way you write! Keep up the good work!
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