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Reviews For: I'll Love You Forever
Stella Grimshaw. 2007-12-14 . chapter 1
Odd format, but a bit refreshing. For some reason this reminded me of firefighters. Not sure why. The only thing I can say to Improve on is more details. Then again you might like dialogue, so do with it what you will, good job nonetheless.
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