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| Waking Adrienne 2008-01-29 ch 1,  | abuseI smell potential I like the dialogue. and the setting. keep going? =] |
| Anehalia 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abusecool. A couple of grammer errors. You started out way to fast. You need to slow down and explain. I will say that I am aready hooked on your story. |
| The Girl who usually review... 2007-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, I like the plot of the story. Keep it up. |
| Samantha Marie Haven 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseit seems pretty interesting, i want to know what happened to alex. the only thing i notcied was that it moved kinda fast, so i had a lil bit of trouble grasping was what going on cuz it went so quickly. but idk if this is official or not, i like it though! i know there's something going on here, i'm curious to know what :) seems like you've got a pretty plot down so far. |