:) This is a TOTALLY awesome story, and I'm totally gonna read the sequel. lol, I say totally too much. Happy writing!
- Christina

maybe its my own narrow mindedness, but what about Maddie no matter what big a b*tch she is, they r gonna have a kid. That means something right? And if he was so much in love with Bri how could he so shamelessly sleep with another woman. I think he does not deserve Bri, he needs to be a man and own up.And Bri needs to face the facts that no matter how perfect he seems he had/has no backbone!
ice.

I love that ur story takes place in the U.K and u can actually write the way they speak because i rlly hate it when ppl from america or some other place try to pull of the English thing and cant do it. I live in switzerland so i prefer the european stories :)

OK, so I know this has been finished for a while, but I've only just finished reading it. I thought I should let you know - I thought it read like a proper novel that I would buy in a shop. I'm seriously impressed! I loved the characters and I'm glad Bri got her memory back. I'm off to read the sequel now.

It's brilliant!
You have a real talent-I can't wait for the next one :)
Well done
x x x

I loved it! This story is amazing! =] There were a few spelling errors and stuff, but I know how that goes! Besides that, it was really good. Continue with writing. Whether it be the sequel to this story or another, just keep writing! BTW, I definately was to read the sequel, even tho I want to rip Maddie's jugular out, I still want to see what she is thinking. =]

i have to say, that has been the most amazing read this year. the story line was amazing, so gripping. i couldnt stop reading it! love it love it love it!

i cant wait for the sequel, your such a talented writer. thank you for keeping me busy this summer! hahaa. :)

ah more more moree!
ha, i officialy check everyday to see if youve added more. i love it love it love itt!

Well,tbh this has what got me through summer.
YAY!They're together!

Love it!

OMG. i actually LOVE this story. your an amazing writer, i love your style. i read the first chapter a few months back and i was completely addicted. i check your page everyday to see if you've posted the next chapter! why leave us on a cliffhanger! thats evil. hahaa. anyway carry on with the good work. your a fantastic writer! i wish i was half as good as you :D

xoxo

ohh.em.eff.gee! Whats with the cliffhanger! You are killing me! I loved this story, and I stayed up like5 nights in a row until like 2AM reading this strory! You must write more, you have to! I LOVE IT!!

--Alicia

It's really good, keep up the fantastic work! :-) x x

E! YAY!

I'm thrilled that Sabrina found out that Maddie was a lying skank and that Reece kissed her. I like how you switch points of view. Seeing Sabrina through Reece's eyes, and vice versa, helps see both of their characters better. Also, I noticed a couple misspellings and grammatical errors. Use SpellCheck and read through your work before posting.

Aww! I have a weakness for cute stories like this!! I also like how you switch points-of-view from chapter to chapter. It gives us, the readers, an eaisier insight into what's happening. But be careful because sometimes you can give too much away. Love the story so far!