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Reviews For: Afraid of the Dark

chocolate roses
2008-03-06
ch 1, anon.
abusenice poem!
kloun doll
2007-12-19
ch 1,
abuseI can relate to this, dark scares me too.

nice poem.
eurtreve
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuse'Hours pass like Minutes'

I've read that phrase before, therefor you do not own it.

besides that, ( a little constructive criticism), i think that you should focus less on rhyming and more on what you're trying to say, as the point can easily get lost in phonetic words.
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