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| chocolate roses 2008-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abusenice poem! |
| kloun doll 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this, dark scares me too. nice poem. |
| eurtreve 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuse'Hours pass like Minutes' I've read that phrase before, therefor you do not own it. besides that, ( a little constructive criticism), i think that you should focus less on rhyming and more on what you're trying to say, as the point can easily get lost in phonetic words. |