short but good
straight to the point
keep it up
cant wait for the next chapter

love it! post more soon!

Hmm... interesting, I like where the story is going and hopefully you will update soon.

ey jacob's father was insane
he had just fallen deeply to the point of obession
there is no curse
and jacob is right he should take things slow
great chapter
lol am impatient as well when its comes to reading stories
cant wait for the next chapter

post more! preferably longer chapters but if u update often then short is fine lol just post more!

this story is amazing !
i love it
you should do character pics =D

anyway,
hurry up and UPDATE!

you are a very good writer. You just don't write very much for each chapter (at least... that's what it looks like once it's posted on fictionpress. lol I know that it could be more on microsoft word :P) I hope you update soon again because it's a very good story and just got a wee bit more interesting! lol

oh bless jacob
but its weird hw he just came into her life.
great chapter though
cant wait for the next chapter

i love it! lol post more soon! o and a quick suggestion - longer posts plz! lol

Hm... Interesting, I like where this is going. Keep up the good work, and Happy New Year! Sorry if I took so long to review, I just decided to look around to see if any of my favorite stories were updated and bam yours was,haha and I am glad that you have decided to continue this story.

Thanks,

BlueCrystalDream

yo,
so he liked her b4 everything?
oh bless but why?
he is mving to fast i can tell u, but i guess if u want something u hve to go for it.
great chapter,
cant wait for the next chapter

Interesting beginning.

It seems pretty obvious to me why the master wants to see her, and even if that's not the case, it seems strange that Riella can't fathom why a man would want to see her all of the sudden (especially since she has to bathe first and look presentable). It's a little hard to believe she would be so dense. :)

Nice chapter and an unexpected twist in event. Her mother a prostitute? Yes there must be more to this, good chapter can't wait for more.

hey new reviewer here lol. i love your story so far, got me interested. i wonder wat jacob wants? but great so far. cnt wait for the next chapter.

OMG about time! Lol I'm just kidding, good chapter though. Keep it up and I am looking forward to another chapter.
~Taylor