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| ContemplativeJoyce 2008-05-08 ch 3,  | abuseThis seems interesting.. though her thinking the L word seems kind of rushed to me.. But still, it was very good :) |
| jlr 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abuseThis story seems like it would be fun to read. Please update soon. ~jlr |
| BlueCrystalDream 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuseSorry I didn't review before hand, I have been in such a bad mood alot lately until two weeks ago and now I am so much happier. Now back on topic, I really like this chapter keep up the good work! Check out my story too ok, I am typing the next chapter I hope you will enjoy. Thanks, ~Taylor BlueCrystalDream |
| mistress tee 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI've not quite read this just yet but... this looks quite good and I don't want to lose this story :) |
| FictionRose 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abuseI'm glad you decided to update, I really love the name Riella. Its very pretty. |
| mariRocks 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter, keep them comin! |
| Inkhearts and Inkstains 2008-02-19 ch 2, | abuseI can't wait for more. Great start. |
| Maria Regina 2008-02-19 ch 2, | abuseIt's alright, a lot of dialogue though... Writer's block was it? or did you just lose interest? It happens a lot. Keep going though, it's too good a storyline to waste. |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abuseNot bad. I like the plot. I hope you update soon! |
| PennyLaneismysong 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI would love to read more of tis story it sounds so awesome!!keep it up! |
| jacksy 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseI'd like you to continue, it would be interesting to see where it goes, because of the implications between classes of society rank in that period, it has a Jane Eyre feel to it, though I suppose every story dealing with a servant and master falling love would do, but it is done from a very different angle, I like it, and hope you continue! |
| Maria Regina 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseOh, a cliffhanger. How evil. It's nice. An air of mystery shrouds it. Like the vibe it gives off. Hoping to see more. |
| FictionRose 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI'm interested. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Good luck! |
| BlueCrystalDream 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far, nice start in fact. I wonder if this meeting will go well? Keep up the good work! I will put up a story soon so you can check it out but I have to wait for a few days... T.T,but it gives me a few days to think of one XD! ~Taylor |