yay - you updated this!! I hope you write more. I like the storyline so far and can''t wait for another update!

Oh...when are you going to finish this? I like it! There's a few nit-picky mechanical things (a couple words not spaced, places where a different form of punctuation would have worked better), but I'm nit-picky...so. ^_^ Thanks for the review! I appreciate it muchly!

I like where this is going. It's very interesting. Update soon and keep up the good work!
Faith