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| book.babe15 2008-02-12 ch 7,  | abuselove it! update! |
| Roselee 2008-02-08 ch 7, anon. | abuseOMG! i love this story it keeps me on edge as to who is the burgler. I can't wait tillthe next chapter! Keep up the fantastic work! (: |
| RockFan 2008-02-04 ch 7, | abuseDon't you DARE leave me hanging! Excellent chapter, of course. Now on to read the other two updates! |
| Nollie Marie 2008-02-01 ch 7, | abuseLove it of course. Huggles N |
| Joli 2008-01-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseSo I just finished the third chapter. I like it so far. :) There are so many possible suspects. Hmm...it really makes me wonder. I think Nicole did it. Just because she's not what you think ;) haha. But seriously..I like it a lot. It makes you think who the suspect cold possibly be and makes your heart flutter when Cale and Nicole are together at the same time. |
| RockFan 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abuseI think this chapter is as amazing as the others and certainly captures and keeps my attention. You have me on the edge of my seat as I can't figure out who did it. Update again soon! |
| Nollie Marie 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abuseIt was good, loved it. huggles N |
| mickeyyearbook 2008-01-13 ch 6, | abuseI almost had a heart attack (from excitement of course!) when i saw that you updated! That was a surprising and unexpected event and it was great. Don't delete it b/c it was good and you're a good writer so don't berate yourself! great job can't wait for the next one |
| mickeyyearbook 2008-01-01 ch 5, | abuseWho that was just more great awesomeness! I love Nicole and Cale they're great for each other! Can't wait for the next update! |
| Dreamless-Wonder 2007-12-31 ch 5, | abuseUpdate soon please! I love what you have written so far. |
| RockFan 2007-12-23 ch 5, | abuseSorry it took me so long to review but I've been tied up (not literally, though...nevermind LOL). Anyway, EXCELLENT chapter! I loved it. I love the awkward shyness! Can't wait for next chapter. |
| Nollie Marie 2007-12-21 ch 5, | abuseLoved it Huggles N PS- I wish I could give gift cards. -sigh- |
| xi-love-you-x3 2007-12-19 ch 4, | abuseAww, this is cute keep writing :] |
| RockFan 2007-12-19 ch 4, | abuseThis story is so engaging that as soon as I start reading it, I forget about everything around me! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Nollie Marie 2007-12-18 ch 4, | abuseLoved it. Huggles N |