Wow. Nice to see him coming around, but I wonder about his motives. Hmm. Keep writing! :)

Oh, man, that's so awful that Mika just did that to her. And now I'm really curious as to how the doctor knows Mika. Interesting. I can't believe this is a real story, but then again, you can't make this stuff up. Keep writing! :)

Wow, 12 and pregnant, huh? That's pretty wild. I think you captured her feelings nicely in this chapter. Keep writing! :)

Another very nice chapter. I liked the "business retreat" line. Someone like him would say that. :) And the end is quite sweet. Keep writing! :)

This is such an intense story. I love the way that you're telling it, with the details of baked potatoes as afterschool snacks and Sister Band-Aid Kneeds. It's just fantastic. Beautiful writing. Keep writing! :)

Aww, what a beautiful introduction to a story. :) The description is phenomenal, and I especially loved the part about her telling you the story - "the sun setting in our eyes through the window in her bedroom." That's gorgeous. Lovely work. Keep writing! :)

i think you know what i'm going to say.

i think 'i love you' suffices.

and 'more' is..yanno. mandatory.