Aww that was so cute :)

aww, chemist
it's adorable--the style you used.
it made me smile.
& i'm glad to see you haven't quit writing. :)
-sara.

I read this first in the nw, and I like it still. I love the ideas here, and you've managed to pull them off beautifully. I think this is the perfect length, with just enough detail to make it vivid, but you didn't overdo it at all. I continue to think you're a writer with incredible potential, and the uniqueness of your stories never ceases to make me envious.

Like I said on neo, Chemist, it's well written. Not my cup of tea.