Reviews for a walk with myself

simpleplan13
2007-12-15
ch 1,

abuseinteresting.. Im not sure if the first 2 lines were part of the poem or not, but they were beautifully done.. I also like the stanza in parenthesis a lot.. the words with dashes kinda confused me though.. im not sure what they were supposed to be, but thats prolly just me.. the whole piece is wonderfully written

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