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Liviania
2008-09-29
ch 11,
abuseFabulous last line. I like the Maddy and Ashes interaction, but feel vaguely guilty for liking it since Maddy and Alex are so cute together.

Livi
Chasmodai Blue
2008-09-22
ch 11,
abuseJust in advance? Everything will be alright Alex. Really. It'll all be okay. You'll move on without him.

That being said: 17 pages of yum. Tasty-tasty man. I love a lot. I like how you don't know what's up with Maddy. It adds to teh conflict.

Can't wait for university to stop abusing you and you to update again.
Spleeny
2008-09-22
ch 11,
abuseyou're making me curious out of my mind about alex! ah!
forty-two dreams
2008-09-22
ch 11,
abuseYour style is still nice, but you need more organization. And boy am I going to enjoy the long, slow dance that is Ashes/Maddy.
pincushion-queen
2008-09-22
ch 11,
abuse>.> i can tell that maddy isn't going to stay with alex. not for the whole story anyway.
that kind of breaks my heart.
*sense of dread; hugs alex*
good chapter can't wait for the next one
sapere
2008-09-22
ch 11,
abuseYay! An updated :)

Great chapter - more guys to Maddy's harem! But I still don't know who my OTP for him is... Well, there's only one things for it! - he needs more guys!
faultlessimperfection
2008-09-22
ch 11,
abuseoh yay! a long chapter. very nice, ashes and maddie certainly have an interesting dynamic going on! hope your enjoying uni!
sapere
2008-09-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! i love Maddy, and the Magpie Syndrome is so original! I love how it's like a male harem, lol...

And a fic set in Canada, yay!

Looking forward to the next update :)

Do you know when you'll be reposting Kidnapped By Blood-Sucking Vampires?
Liviania
2008-08-02
ch 10,
abuseWonderful story! Maddy is adorable, and he's lucky to have good friends when he's off his meds. And I like how he's not just the standard wimp in most stories . . . he can play lacrosse, throw a punch, etc.

Livi
glitter.in.my.eye
2008-07-29
ch 10,
abuseI found this story yesterday
and ever since the first chapter,
I've been all OMFG
i really like all the characters
and Maddy he's so quirky~
iloveit!
ErikaSlytherin
2008-07-26
ch 10,
abusekwl fic
Chasmodai Blue
2008-07-24
ch 10,
abuseAha! I like it!
Maddy has suspense around him. I am intrigued. And ANGST! ANGST FRANKIE KNOWS ABOUT BUT MADDY DOESN'T?! And why does Frankie's gender identity seem in question?

*attempts hypnosis on you*

There will be more son.
It's Just That
2008-07-13
ch 10,
abuseOkay.

So we finally get to see Maddy's parents, huh? Well that's a relief. I was beginning to think that he was being neglected and shite like that, LOL! I mean, we haven't seen his parents having an active role so far, have we-?

Anyway.

Maddy sounds like a total slut. And I'm not saying that no teenager isn't a slut, but he certainly comes off as one. He's just so blasé with his relationships.

Alex prolly had sex with Ashes once. I'm betting my money on that, because they seem to have a LONG history with each other. A seriously long one.

FAAW~WCKK.

It's sweltering here. I need to seriously fix up that bloody ancient A/C behind me. e_e

Okay, okay, sorry for going off tangent...

I meant to say that Alex is really gay, and that I can't exactly understand the rich school hierarchy system. I know that there's old money and new money, but I can't really tell the difference with either or. I mean--C'MON.

Old money basically means someone that had their arses cleaned for them since they were a wee baby, and new money is someone who knows the harshness of life and can attest to how difficult it can be. XD

Weeiird.

I was surprised that Ashes threw in a truce with Maddy, but then again, I should've seen that coming, really.

DIE ASIAN PREPPY CHICK GIRL THAT IS TERMED ROYAL BITCH.

Raawr.

I wanted to punch her face in.

But I resisted that urge because I'm good like that.

Awesome people interracting so far. ;d The parent thingy is a little surprising, however I learned to deal with the fact that Maddy has awesome parents and shit.

Cool. D:
starwberrys-rule
2008-07-11
ch 10,
abuseLoove it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Deadly-moons
2008-07-10
ch 3,
abusewould STUFOOCAF be like, student food cafeteria or something, because that's the only thing i can think of. I like your story by the way.
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