 bandgirlz 2009-10-28 . chapter 14I don't believe you that you went and started writing. Enough with the fake out...time for a new chapter!! |
 Hollyivy 2009-10-25 . chapter 10so he's attracted to shiny stuff and fish? |
 Hollyivy 2009-10-25 . chapter 3hm? maybe studio food cafeteria or something. |
 The Fragile Asphyxiate 2009-10-24 . chapter 13I really, really, really enjoy this story... And his grandmother. Haha.
So, I feel so torn between Alex and Ashes because I really love both of them for Maddy, and I feel like he'll end up with Ashes. BUT POOR ALEX! I love him, and he'll be heart broken and Nic'll take his revenge.
Blegh. DRAMA.
Anyways, it's late. Haha, and I'm actually reviewing something which just doesn't happen. Feel honored (even though you don't have much or a reason to).
Update soon? Please? ^_^ |
 XxUnheardxX 2009-10-09 . chapter 14EP! I totally thought this was a chapter. Now... I am sad. >.> And you haven't updated in three months. If you don't update, I will probably cry. So... GET TO WORK, MY AUTHOR-SLAVE! ;) By the way, I lovee your story. I wanna know what happens! =whine=
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 lazy turpentine 2009-09-19 . chapter 14 Damn betch update soon and Ill give you a REAL review |
 Raibix 2009-09-05 . chapter 14i just read this story and i fell in love from the ver beginning. seriously, this story just makes me smile, even though i want Ashes x Maddy, but i will survive! please update soon, because i want so much more ~ |
 RainbowVampire 2009-09-05 . chapter 13Okay so, this is the second story of yours that I have read and I just have to ask...
Where do all these story ideas come from?!
I love how this story has that whole cliche` thing going for it but it's also pretty unique in it's own way and I don't understand how you do it. It's confusing, but amazing! :D
I love the characters in this story aswell. I can't seem to figure out who Maddy is going to end up with. He seems to have a million boy crushes. Alex is very cute and I really like him with Maddy. Ashes was annoying at first but he is growing on me and for some reason I really like Artsy boy.
Anyway, that's enough of my random rambling.
I'm so sorry I couldn't leave a better review!
Update soon! |
 shadylight 2009-08-19 . chapter 13lol, Maddy is so cute XD I like Alex, but I have to say that I like Maddy with Ashes more >.< But either way, I love this story :D Hope to read more soon! |
 Oki3xDoki3 2009-08-15 . chapter 14Nu I don't know why but I want maddy to dump alex.
I'm so mean. >.< I like she's way better. Update soon plz |
 whippoorwillwoe 2009-08-07 . chapter 4frankie is so cute! C: |
 jenni-tay 2009-08-05 . chapter 14this story is so awesome. i loved how he freaked out it was so funny!!
and if my grandma did that to me i would be fucken freaked...
plz update soon! |
 HazeleyedHoney 2009-07-25 . chapter 14I just thought of one more cliche: The frumpy-homo to sexy-homo makeover! You don't have that in your story, but I've come across that in slash and yaoi A LOT, so maybe you could add it? I could totally see Frankie doing a makeover on someone. She just has that personality. Although, to stick with the cliche you'd need someone flamboyantly gay and not afraid to speak his mind. Maybe Mickey? Is he flamboyantly gay? I know he flirts a lot and is out spoken...eh, you decide even if you want this cliche or not. It just popped in my head is all. I'll quit spamming you. See ya next chapter. |
 HazeleyedHoney 2009-07-24 . chapter 13At least his grandma didn't buy him sex toys, 'cause that would be far scarier than just condoms and lube. I love this story!! I don't know why, but I even though this story is FULL of cliches, its still really good. You forgot a few cliches like really shy cute student, and cool silent friend, but those are cliches from yaoi manga. I'm not sure if your adding those or only cliches from slash stories? Great story. Update as soon as you can. |
 infinite.silence 2009-07-19 . chapter 13lol his grandma is too funny!
can't wait for the next chapter (: |