I love reading mysteries and trying to solve them... Excellent!

This was really sweet and perfect thing to cure a need for a goo but not fluffy one shot.

nice attention to detail.
i could feel her anxiety and love and everything.
very well done.

Wow. W.O.W. O.O I LOVE it! :D It's great, with just the right amount of love.

I'd like to ask this now (not finished looking through all of your fabulous stories yet), are you going to write a background for this? Or ever continue it? That would be great if you could. :)

I really like it! :D

This was insane! I loved it as much as I loved TCC. It was just so grippingly original!

I never realised this came up. Or I simply dismissed the email. Either way I only just read it.
One thing I need you to know, after all my experience as a past Buffy fan and presently being an avid reader of the Twilight series by Stephanie Meyer, is that there are no rules to what is defined as a vampire other than the consumption of blood for sustenance. Gosh, don't I sound smart? Anyway, Meyer's "vampire" uses the eyes to indicate thirst, black for empty and gold/red for full depending on your fancy - human or animal. They are also stealthy fast, cold as ice, solid as marble and the are inhumanly beautifult with their white skin and enhanced features. A vampire is created by being bitten as the poison from the fangs runs through the veins of the body and transforms the human into a vampire, stopping the heart.
But that's completely different to the gist you're working on, which is the common portrayal of vampire complients and what is usually refered to whenever any movie or story refers to this supernatural creature.
Personally, I like Meyer's play on it, it's a bit wittier than the general misconceptions of the public portrayal of blood-drinkers.
So there you have it. My point is that you can't go wrong as long as they drink blood, they are, invariably, a vampire.
Love and mental health,
Mackenzie

Wow...Yeah, how did she not figure out a secret like that earlier? I guess denial does that to you. Very well written and actually sexy.

that was so good! i was hoping for more!

...i like it!
keep writing!

:-O
I loved it! It was one of the best mix of supernatural and romantic writing ever! The best of two worlds! Way to sexy and weird for me to be able to describe it!

You rock!
__Tina__

I loved this. I especially like your dialogue - very realistic. I like how you made it supernatural, but subtly, so it's totally believable.

i lurv it! although, i think it can use a bit of stalling.. a few more details.. i mean, she can't believe that easily.. she should've gone into denial first. but it's cool.

Well done! It reminded me of another writer, lulai, and her vampire series, you should check her out.

This seriously needs a 2nd chapter to it.
Oh goodness makes me want a vampire boyfriend now.
:]

Muy bueno.