|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseReally sweet, I forgot the name for this style of rhyming, where every line is rhymed with another, but you've done it almost perfectly, each word has a rhyme well thought up to go with it, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI like the whole idea of the power one object can have.. its great |
| A Healing Heart 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseI like the flow of this poem. -Blood |