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Reviews For: The Gong

Lurid Black
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseReally sweet, I forgot the name for this style of rhyming, where every line is rhymed with another, but you've done it almost perfectly, each word has a rhyme well thought up to go with it, keep writing!
~Lurid~
simpleplan13
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abuseI like the whole idea of the power one object can have.. its great
A Healing Heart
2007-12-18
ch 1,
abuseI like the flow of this poem.
-Blood
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