i really like this story

up-date soon

cute! I'm looking forward for the next chapter, I hope you do post it up! I didn't expect this story to update! And it's really great! tc!)

Happy New Year to you!

I love this story! It's really great :) (but i did have to go back and re read the first chapter..hint hint...)

Update soon :)

OOD

Oh God... YOU ACTUALLY UPDATED! I can't believe it. Thanks so much. I so cannot wait for you to write more. Please please please, you have to update soon. Sooner than the last time at least. Ooh and happy new year 2009!

Nancy -xox-

I loved the pov change..it was interesting, definitely. He's so protective towards his son, which is really sweet. And Desi is an angel too. Update soon!

He has a kid? Oh wow..that's insane. It was kind of predictable that they were going to meet again, but it was still well executed. I love this so far! :)

This is such a heartwarming story. :)

So adorable. :D

O.o

You updated this?

ZOMG. haha.

But this was a really good chapter, I always thought that this story was a one-shot. :D

I saw an error/typo/what not at the beginning, and the only reason I noticed it was because I was reading every single word.

Yeah you're that good. :P

But here it is:

"He wouldn't stayed at his Grandma's house.."

Just need to change the "stayed" to "stay".

Lookin' forward to yo' next update!

Mucho love-o

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier

you better update, woman.

ha! this story is hilarious!]

are you ever going to update it?

Wow. This is awesome. Are you planning on updating sometime? :]

so when is the next chapter? please write fast!

Oh My... if you don't update now... I'LL SUE YOU! 8D

come on, please?

Hehhehe so... when are ya going to update?

r u gnna post the 2nd one up? I lke the 1st chappie! I'm prtty sure this can trn in2 a supergood story!