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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseThe excessive use of periods really made an incredibally dramatic effect on the poem, in fact it seemed whole and without them would have probably seemed rather mundane. But with these added haults it is very much like pain itself, jagged and raw. Wonderful portryal. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |