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| kirarin242 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseheh love it!^-^! |
| babydollgonewrong 2008-04-14 ch 11, | abuseWow, I'm so incredibly impressed, I must say. I love the way your characters speak, they're just so witty and hilarious. It reminded me of Juno, which is one of my favorite movies. Plus, I just love Lali, she's not the typical cry-every-chapter-cause-the-guy-i-like-doesn't-love-me girl, which is totally unexpected and in many cases original. I love it! Make sure to keep writing, you have fantastic skill. |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-03-27 ch 24, | abuseloved it(= nowim off to read yuur sequel |
| Lizzy-Lou 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHahaha. I love it! Poor Lali! I do love a hot teacher though! but you knew that! Will be sure to read more of this very soon! |
| bulletsthrudoves 2008-03-02 ch 24, anon. | abuseheya girlie, i know im superdiduper late in reviewing this (cuz i procrastinate! :D ) but its ** amazing and the rape whistle hahaa RAPERAPERAPERAPE good times on the stairwell hun :P see yas! peace |
| sticks stones and TECHNO 2008-02-24 ch 24, | abuseThis is the first actually long story I've ever fully read on this website, and I loved it a lot. Definalty one of my favorites. I wish I could write like that. *Squeels* Now for the sequel! :D |
| give.me.back.my.drumsticks 2008-02-10 ch 24, | abuseI effing love that story it was so amazing. Although I would love to know what happens with Hamby and Lali. I like the 13 days idea. And it'd be kewl if you did a sequel to freaky Goth Girl, just don't take to long. |
| Eternity's Ink 2008-01-10 ch 24, anon. | abuseIt's over? Darnit! So great. Please write a sequel! |
| camila 2008-01-09 ch 24, anon. | abuseI can't believe it ends that way, I wasn't expecting that at all but it was awesome! I really like how you finished it because it wasn't the typical happy ending which make your story even more unique. It's a little sad that's already over but I'm looking toward to read your new story and the offer is still going if you want to, just email me and ask me anything. It was really fun to read your story and I had a good time laughing with Lali's thoughts and actions. You are a really good writter. |
| betharooni 2008-01-07 ch 24, anon. | abuseaw haha you're welcome and all i could do is close my eyes and cross my arms and hope to die cause you don't ** listen when i'm around the least you could do is take it back all the vicous (yes i still can't spell that word!) remarks and verbal attacks cause i can't ** stand it when you're around! lololololz good times! yes i definitly want to read 13 days, reading after i'm done with this and HEY EVERYONE! DID YOU KNOW THAT THE PERSON THAT HAMBY WAS BASED ON CUT HIS HAIR? HIS CUURLS ARE ALL GONE NOW! NO! |
| Jevanminx 2008-01-07 ch 24, | abuseYou so have to do a sequel of some kind, it would be so great to see the two finally together. Though of course I cannot force you to do so, hehehehe. Its been a lovely story to read so thankyou for that. JM |
| Jevanminx 2008-01-07 ch 23, | abuseYou cant leave it ther, please, give me just a little bit more, just like a run away or a kiss or hug something, I dont think I could cope otherwise. See I knew she couldnt pee for a whole thirty minutes either so thankyou for that. JM |
| n. paige 2008-01-07 ch 24, | abuseI'm so sad it's over... but I'm excited for 13 days... and whatever comes next! thanks for mentioning me! it's sweet what you said! |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-01-06 ch 24, | abusehey im going to review this chapter becuase like you said im loyal and i have to review omg gosh to all those thing that is so cool and your new one sound cool ill have a read of it and review it ok |
| katherine haynes 2008-01-06 ch 24, anon. | abusePleaz do a sequel! i so want to see what happens next! you can't just leave a huge cliffhanger and not write a sequel!! |