|Reviews for Cradled In Peace|
| gillkjblhkfjfhbk 4/24/13 . chapter 1
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| lost-balloon 11/23/09 . chapter 1
I love choka's in school we studied them for two years and learned how to read them in chines ahh there beautiful i recommend them.
| East-0f-Eden 7/9/09 . chapter 1
it's very sweet and thanks for showing me a new format. choka i'll have to remember that. Is it something from Austrilia bc i've never heard of it here in the US.
| irish-ileana 6/9/09 . chapter 1
| Yeshua 5/18/08 . chapter 1
Awesome poem, do you practice? It was nice, and cute.
| Artemis Reborn 3/21/08 . chapter 1
This is so sweet and tender. I liked "to hold and kiss your heart". I thought that was such a unique way to express how much you care and worship this person, and wish to care for them. It's truly beautiful.
| the Stranger in the moonlight 1/31/08 . chapter 1
Aw.. this was sweet and lonely feeling. But the hope in the final line makes it all ok. Nicely done one of your best I dare say.
| Autumn Reflections 1/28/08 . chapter 1
Very beautiful and it gives the greatest of feelings.
| Maggot Blood 1/7/08 . chapter 1
I like this Choka alot better then anything else in that style, brings out more meaning and thought. Great work.
| Moondog Dozier 12/27/07 . chapter 1
Very peaceful and serene. Flows well with the sincerity. Good write. MD:77.
| Blissfully Sarcastic 12/26/07 . chapter 1
How you use so little a piece to get across so big a message is beyond me.
And how you used a love poem such as this without sounding clichéd...My goodness!
The flow is pretty amazing, too, as is the word choice.
(I'm envious now.)
| loversdream17 12/23/07 . chapter 1
great job girl. I really loved the ending. Keep up the good work.
| SayIt'sWrong 12/21/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem. I really liked it. Was very peaceful and well written.
| Michael l'oeil fol 12/19/07 . chapter 1
Thanks for the review...usually i prefer rhyme...but i do like this...your line breaks are interesting. Where to chokas come from? ive never seen the style before...until our paths cross again
| subliminalsquirrel 12/18/07 . chapter 1
nice spacing from 3rd to 4th line