| Reviews for Cradled In Peace |
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lost-balloon 11/23/09 . chapter 1I love choka's in school we studied them for two years and learned how to read them in chines ahh there beautiful i recommend them. |
East-0f-Eden 7/9/09 . chapter 1it's very sweet and thanks for showing me a new format. choka i'll have to remember that. Is it something from Austrilia bc i've never heard of it here in the US. |
irish-ileana 6/9/09 . chapter 1Thank you. |
Yeshua 5/18/08 . chapter 1Awesome poem, do you practice? It was nice, and cute. |
Artemis Reborn 3/21/08 . chapter 1This is so sweet and tender. I liked "to hold and kiss your heart". I thought that was such a unique way to express how much you care and worship this person, and wish to care for them. It's truly beautiful. Art. |
the Stranger in the moonlight 1/31/08 . chapter 1Aw.. this was sweet and lonely feeling. But the hope in the final line makes it all ok. Nicely done one of your best I dare say. Jackie |
Autumn Reflections 1/28/08 . chapter 1Very beautiful and it gives the greatest of feelings. |
Maggot Blood 1/7/08 . chapter 1I like this Choka alot better then anything else in that style, brings out more meaning and thought. Great work. Maggot. |
Moondog Dozier 12/27/07 . chapter 1Very peaceful and serene. Flows well with the sincerity. Good write. MD:77. |
Blissfully Sarcastic 12/26/07 . chapter 1How you use so little a piece to get across so big a message is beyond me. And how you used a love poem such as this without sounding clichéd...My goodness! The flow is pretty amazing, too, as is the word choice. (I'm envious now.) |
loversdream17 12/23/07 . chapter 1great job girl. I really loved the ending. Keep up the good work. Mandi4life |
SayIt'sWrong 12/21/07 . chapter 1Beautiful poem. I really liked it. Was very peaceful and well written. Good job! QueenVixta |
Michael l'oeil fol 12/19/07 . chapter 1Thanks for the review...usually i prefer rhyme...but i do like this...your line breaks are interesting. Where to chokas come from? ive never seen the style before...until our paths cross again Michael |
subliminalsquirrel 12/18/07 . chapter 1nice spacing from 3rd to 4th line good work! |