OK, Anne is really scary. I liked the suspense in this chapter. You left the last part open to interpretation which was really effective.

Oh I'm so glad you're writing again! I've missed you so much! Anyway, on to the story.
I really really like it so far. I'm a little confused about what's going on, but given that this is just the prologue, I'd expect that.
I don't really have much to say in the way of criticism, except that you've almost used too many metaphors... I like how creative they are, but I think you should be careful that your metaphors don't overpower the story with their awesomeness.
I'm ready to read the rest of it!
-Jess

Wow you really got the emotions of obsession and want down. I'm intrested to see where you go with this. Good job!