Reviews for Fantaisie Impromptu

Slightly Obsessive 2007-12-20 ch 2,	abuseOK, Anne is really scary. I liked the suspense in this chapter. You left the last part open to interpretation which was really effective.
Literary Master 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseOh I'm so glad you're writing again! I've missed you so much! Anyway, on to the story. I really really like it so far. I'm a little confused about what's going on, but given that this is just the prologue, I'd expect that. I don't really have much to say in the way of criticism, except that you've almost used too many metaphors... I like how creative they are, but I think you should be careful that your metaphors don't overpower the story with their awesomeness. I'm ready to read the rest of it! -Jess
Slightly Obsessive 2007-12-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow you really got the emotions of obsession and want down. I'm intrested to see where you go with this. Good job!