AH! i came back to reread this story and its gone! i cant wait for it to be back up.

You have now idea how disappointed I feel right now. I love this story and I'd really like to reread it (again... it would be my third time). I have no idea how long it will take for you to edit it as you please, but I'm hoping not so long.

I just want you to know I REALLY like this story. Now I feel bad I never printed or saved it, and just took it for granted here.

Anyway, I'm sure whatever you do will be for the best. I just don't like the fact that I'll never read the original piece again. Can't wait for the edited version. Hope you'll post it soon.

Um, I can’t remember if I ever wrote a review for this story, (probably didn’t cuz’ I’m a silent lurker and stuff) but when I clicked on it and read your note I kinda had this spaz moment where I thought you’d taken it down(permanently) for some reason. So! While I was working on this long, and I mean long, writing mutli-story thing for educational purposes I’m sure I started thinking about this story. Don’t know why, it just popped into my head and I felt like reading it again. Here I am, done with my project and the story’s not here…. *dies*… Okay no, I can be patient and wait for you to repost (I hope) and in the mean time I will write a review of some sort just so you know how awesome this story is…was… is going to be again when you put it back up, whatever. I haven’t read TRSG for awhile so I can’t tell you about my fav parts and why they were my favorite, but general stuff? I can try. And then I can maybe come and tell you what specifically I liked. So general stuff: there was a build! You didn’t jump into the relationship and just you know WHAM BAM POW THE END!... *ahem* I loved that you didn’t do that! We slowly got to know the main chara. Through his random thinking, by the way I love his er, thought process(?), whatever it was I love how you wrote the story. Also you didn’t focus on just Eric and Wyatt! We got to know the band members, family members, and hell even the fangirls! Even if it was a brief and terribly scarring encounter it was great reading a story where the conflicts were not all about the main character or him struggling with some profound sense of… something. Eric had his little problems, a temper, he wasn’t perfect and by the end of the story he hadn’t become perfect. Thank god for that. And the last chapter? Oh god, it was perfect! It was so sweet and yet so, so like Eric! (Also I realize that this is more of a rant than a review… but it’s as close as I’ll probably get to one so…)

Whoa! i just noticed this story was down... Wow do I feel out of the loop. I can't wait to see it when it's back up again!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie

Good luck getting published! But I'm bummed to see it get taken down. I was only on chapter nine :(

I have so much love for this series. I love your characters! And I'm very happy to see that you're writing a story about James as well! And a Wyatt ficlet! (I love Wyatt to pieces, I really do)

I thoroughly enjoyed this series. Well done!

Baw. Oh my god, woman. Oh. My. God.
You should probably prepare for a pretty long review for two reasons: 1. I read this on my phone the other day (all in one sitting) and could not review at the time because my phone doesn't like reviewing things. 2. I am, and always have been, a rambler. So you're stuck with me for a few minutes, sorry. D:
Anyway.
Where to begin? At first, I was honestly kind of like 'No, this will not work,' because I was sure you'd be like GAYSEX randomly and ruin it. But you held off for SIXTEEN FREAKIN' CHAPTERS, which was nothing less than magical. I seriously bow down to you for that. That takes some restraint. Or maybe it doesn't on your part, but it's not something you see often in...anything romantic. I mean, original fics, fanfics, hell, novels even, like to thrust romance at you and go 'Here it is, now suffer through the relationship!'
I am, in case you couldn't tell, an avid 'mm, build-up!' sort of romantic. Don't get me wrong, I liked the last few chapters of this, but the best moment for me was 'ohmygodhandholdingnoway!' in chapter sixteen and all the lead up to that moment. After that, I was still like 'baw, I like them,' but that was the cutest scene for me, because I'm a weirdo like that.
The acknowledgement of forums and fangirls and texting that isn't always perfect looking (and that includes a :D once and a while) also made this story win. I simply cannot get how some stories (fic or published) can act like that stuff doesn't exist, especially in this sort of context.
And then. There's Eric. Totally not your fault, but I kept associating him with Eric from That 70's Show. But, that's besides the point. I /adored/ Eric. He was a douche bag! He was mean and sometimes arrogant! He didn't even really have a secret nice-guy side. He's himself, and unabashedly so, for the most part. So he just needs so many...I don't know what's. Whatever he wants. A new Game Boy, maybe. Okay, probably. He needs a new Game Boy.
And Wyatt...glasses. Muh. -melts into puddle- Honestly, if he had just been a personality-less robot with glasses on, I would have adored him. I love glasses. But with a personality /and/ glasses?! He almost shouldn't be allowed both. He slayed me. May he never be made over by Eric's mother, amen. Or something like that.
And all the other characters (especially London, o boy did I like that man) were so good too. You had a full cast of likeable characters!
Baw. Well, I've probably fangirl'd enough for a small country of people. Whatever that means.
I kind of felt like a massive asshole because I favorite'd this, but didn't review it, but the reason that happened was because I don't have a computer at my house, so I was reading this whole story on my phone, which doesn't let me review things. D: I hate coming off as one of those favorite-and-run people, so I just had the itch to explain that, haha.
Anyway. This story. Um. Epic. I think that pretty much sums it up, honestly!
8D
-tweek

OMG that last bit was so sweet =]

This story is amazing btw.

I read this all in one sitting and my eyes are KILLING me, since I just couldn't bring myself to look away as often as I probably should have, but whatever ...

I LOVE this story. :D It's ... wow. Just brilliant. I think that I just added Wyatt, Eric, and James to my list of fictional characters who I'm completely in love with (and there's not many characters I allow on that list). All the characters were so realistic and ... wow.

The ending made me do something I hardly EVER do: Fangirl. Seriously. It's not my thing in the least bit, and your story made me do it. o_o

In short, this story is awesome. [:

((It's 2:00 AM now, so I'm sorry that this review isn't better, haha))

this story gets favourited for the use of the word 'troll'
among other things.

I fucking loved this story.
I didn't want it to end. I didn't even know it was coming to an end, I was to caught up, until I read 'THE END.'
Gah! That's so sweet! And there such an un-generic couple.
Seriously though, it was awesome. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

that was a fun read :) i have a something for band stories. but fanfiction about real bands freaks me out. eh, i mean i don't really have the time to read them XD
and i absolutely love simon's attitude.

'nuff ramble. i'll be back :)

Kay totally read the whole thing in one sitting... bad idea. M' fucking tired. But anyway. "You should stop worrying about the past and just eat some pie." That was from like... chapter five and I still remember it. What good advice. And that holding-hands scene was, oh I dunno, really great. They just held hands but it was so very epic. What else... oh, I only saw two spelling mistakes in the entire thing (and god I hope you don't drive yourself crazy trying to find them), so hooray. :)

And the ending made my head spin :D The whole thing is just wonderful!

The part where Eric threw the skittles at Wyatt cracked me up like no other.
=D

It was great. =]