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| SilverTwilight 2007-12-22 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful descriptions, and such a nice picture. Perhaps clearer sentences would help, but otherwise, it's very good. ~ Dx |
| LipoAccipitridae 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abusenice metaphors, xD |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the personification its great.. and the peppermint thing is really nice too.. awesome piece |
| ericfantasy17 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseawesome! |
| Nemonus 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseGood descriptions. Tis unique...reminds me of Narnia a bit, and also of every day. |