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Julius Gillian
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI'd like to take the quotes from my bio to answer what I think of this poem. Which is masterfully thought out btw.


" There is no need for temples; no need for complicated philosophy. Our own brain, our own heart is our temple; my philosophy is kindness. "

The Dalai Lama

“ The kingdom of God cometh not with outward show; neither shall they say, Lo here! or, Lo there! for behold, the kingdom of God is within you. ”

Jesus Christ

" The highest possible stage in moral culture is when we recognize that we ought to control our thoughts. "

Charles Darwin

“ You can search throughout the entire universe for someone who is more deserving of your love and affection than you are yourself, and that person is not to be found anywhere. You yourself, as much as anybody in the entire universe deserve your love and affection. “

Buddha Gautama
Doc Blood
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseIt appears we think far too much alike. I find that my within is without lately. As usual, well done.

Peace, Doc
Kicking Poe
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abusethoughtful and intriguing. I like the dusky tone and rhythm. cheers.
Dragonwriter's Love
2007-12-19
ch 1,
abuseI liked the flow.
-Blood
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