aw, it's adorable :D:D:D:D:D

i can just see it as a children's book with cute little illustrations every now and then =]

hehehe. anyways, merry xmas and a happy new year (im making an effort to add that 2 all of my recent reviews XD)

~srz

"Before stood the scariest" You missed the 'me'. [= But otherwise, this is so cute! If you could illustrate it you have no idea how adorable I think it'd be. heh. No, I mean that. And as for being published, probably could be as a children's story.

And I"m too lazy to reply to your review about Road Trip's new chapter, so, yeah. Glad you like the story. [= Maybe I'll get the new chapter up this weekend, but it's gotta be edited, like I said, and you have no IDEA how many times I read through it before I'm satisfied. haha.

Anyhow, good job.