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| Itsuyaya 2008-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseLol! I loved this one. You should bring William into the main story sometime. I also loved that reference to the couch. It was very funny. I'm gonna tell all my friends to get an account on this just so they can review your stories. ^-^! |
| Daydream Nation 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseSemi-funny. Semi-insanity. xP |
| bleepbloopbanana 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseIt's amazing how you managed to keep Adrian's voice the same even in a backstory, and your writing style is so distinctive, too. -wibble- First of all, "...except without a free toy." DISCRIMINATION. That is all. Secondly, "“Watch the peace lily!” I yell. God, I wish he wasn't so bipolar." I loled. Read it again. Loled some more. Thirdly, I didn't see any gayness between those two, and admittedly, showcasing a cutesy brotherly relationship between two hot guys takes talent. -bows- And it had a happy ending! Yays. Though I don't suppose it'd be easy for a vampire to kill himself anyway... But, um, yeah. I'm enjoying these sidestories way more than I should be. :] Keep writing...! Bleep |
| Carmel March 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! I liked the little bits of humour that you stuck in there :) Keep up the great work! ~Carm~ |