SO CHEESY! I LOVE IT =D

I think you did a great job with this oneshot!

sweet.

you're really good at making cliches original, if that makes any sense.

falling in love with someone who heals you-that's typical, but loving more than one someone and their little character quirks-that's what makes this unique.

in other words, this story is awesome.

i love this. its kinda vague but i understand it. u should add more to it instead of it being a one shot.

It's not vague. I understood it. I Loved It! Of course you being an excellent writer certainly helps. I was smiling after I read this too. So now, you've made me smile twice. Thanks again.

WOW eighty years kinda big

yea..it started off quite vague, but then as i read along, i developed really nicely

Ooh snap this was heartbreakingly sweet. The writing was so elegant and the plot was just... awesome. So, so happy the wicked monkey added this to our c2. (: This was so good. :]

poor alex... anyways, it's good! ((:

It was a good short story. Really good. Yeah, it was vague, but you had very good characters.

hey girl..that was really good..i loved it...at first i was crying, but now its turns out a good ending...looking forward to read your stories...good one shot though...bye..bye...

Well, despite it being vague and lacking in plot, I thought it was awesome; I loved it. You have one amazing talent, let me tell you.

aw, it was positively adorable :)
It was rather odd, though...Brian was IN love with Alex and Ange?

But still cute

whoa. the beginning totally threw me off, but the ending was amazing. i love it! =D you're a fantastic writer. almost made me cry. haha.

-lqd