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| Basara 2007-12-18 ch 1,  | abuselol... nice... |
| DiaRose 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute! I really love this, it reads very uniquely. Love, ~Dia |
| criti-sized 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseLol, this haiku came off more humourous to me than it did angsty. I like the point of it, and how it's straight to the point. Of course, being a haiku, it's bound to be straight to the point, but it didn't have the around the block effect that most haikus have. C.S. |